What is your top rated songs?

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(Readed is not a word, so I changed the title of your blog post a bit.  Grammarly may be able to help with your proofreading.  Please italicize book titles.  I think you may have confused the author with the publisher.  Please see me for help with explaining your thoughts.)

The title of my book is called The Book that ate my Brother and the author is Stone Arch Books.What hook me in is that book can ate people,but is it scares  me that  that book is dangerous. I don’t want to stop reading because it is so sad because I want to know about what is going to happen.Why I like this story is because of how scary it is.Why I feel happy when other people enjoy your story because it makes me feel that i am not the only one that likes the book. That’s why I love this book.

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How many posts did you write?

I wrote 8 posts.

How many were school based, your own interests or set by the challenge?

All 8 of them were school based ,my interest, or set by challenges.

How many comments did you receive from classmates, teachers or overseas students?

I believe only I got only one.

Which post received the most comments? 

The one that got the most comments was Hello World.

Why do you think that happened?

It has a great title and it is fun to read.

Which post did you enjoy writing the most and why?

It’s called My Volleyball Community because I like to play volleyball and I love it.

Did you change blog themes at all and why?

Yes because I wanted it to look better and now it looks like pretty flowers everywhere.

How many widgets do you have? 

I only have five widgets

Do you think this is too many or not enough?

I think that want I did was not enough.

How many overseas students do you have on your blogroll?

I don’t think that I have any.

How many overseas students do you have on your blogroll?

I don’t think I have any.

What were your first impressions of this blog?

I like to know what I can do. WOW!!!

What captured your attention?

What we have and could do.

What distracted you on the blog?

How we can make our own fame.
What suggestions can you give me to improve my blog?

I think that if you keep on trying you can do it.

 

 

 

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In school, I am in middle school. I have four teachers for every subject. I have a lot of friends. Oh… I forgot my favorite subject is math. That’s some info about my school, but there is more.

Maybe like…. when we have to go class to class and not be late. I also dream that I can go to UH. Which means University of Hawaii. It is a great school and I want to go there because it’s a thing that my cousins do like if you go there your child should go there. I think that it is so much fun.

The last thing that I want to share wth you is that my school is a great school for your child. I teach you manners and other things that make you a great person. You can even make cool friends.Which I think is great. That is like all I have to share. Thanks and bye!!!

How many posts did you write?

I wrote 22.

How many were school based, your own interests or set by the challenge?

Out of all my post there was 11.

How many comments did you receive from classmates, teachers or overseas students?

 

Which post received the most comments? Why do you think that happened?

Which post did you enjoy writing the most and why?

Did you change blog themes at all and why?

How many widgets do you have? Do you think this is too many or not enough?

How many overseas students do you have on your blogroll?

Which web tools did you use to show creativity on your blog?

When I was five I went to Disneyland and I didn’t like the rollercoaster. So then after that when I came home like after three days. I felt bad that I was scared of the roller-coaster.  Then I promise to myself that when I was seven I would try it again and see I like it. So, when I was seven I went back and tried it I so so liked it.

After I got off I just wanted to go it again and again. It was like a ride I never like more before. When I did it I told myself that I improved in something that I didn’t like. I got this idea from this blog I hope you try to comment on this blog.I think she did I great job.

Also, I forgot if like it please comment and I will comment back on yours. I think that improving is way better than failing and not trying to do better.Travel is a good way to improve the things that you hate or need to improve in. I hope that you will again comment on this blog. She does a great job on her post.